In Your Fist Comments

It is the simplicity of this one that makes such an impact. And 'fist' is such a great word too. Lovely write. Warmly, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Like perfumes Of jasmine and roses In the breeze of the evening In the desert at sunset Like a flying horse Towards heaven In defiance of time And space multiplied With nothingness I shall hold you In the power of my arm The nothingness I breathe To be eternal myself

Forever oh moonbeam caught

gone with the wind...out of the fist! a golden uncatchable fish? ...nice and short...a fistful...10

well done well done did you read my poem Rose written in Haiku and Holidai season let me konw what you think of my Haikus

You certainly know how to issue a challenge, Reshma! Strong and concise!

Beautifully, Reshma... 10.... Tsira