Thursday, September 14, 2006

In Your Eyes Comments

Rating: 4.6

Your eyes, like two pools of water, gaze for a moment into mine,
I feel a strange sensation coming over me and I am gone from this place,
My feet lift off the ground and the world around us disolves,
Your eyes glisten like two bright stars, lighting up my once dark heart.
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Mariann Gentile
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Steve Hagget 14 September 2006

Good poem with a strong flow and great expression of emotion, Steve

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