In your eyes where shadows stray,
by heartbreak they were cast
you look at me through lowered lash,
through shadows of your past,
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What a heartwarming piece...a pleasure to read...the words flowing so gently and wonderfully. i love it, my friend! thanks! :)
This is so lovely indeed sir! ! ! ! ! ! I loved this one... very passionate and beautiful indeed.... these days i m sort of restricted to reading these sorts of stuff. helps to relax my mind.. lovely.... with lots of love shan
Another Wow! Laurie. Where is all this beautiful poetry coming from? Where ever it is, please keep it up, as it is simply divine! 10 Karin Anderson
I can say WOW. Laurie, once again, you have reached many a ladys heart with your touching poem. I have always said you have a way with our hearts and this is further proof :) Thank you for sharing your talent with us my friend :)
Hello Laurie and just a word to let you know I enjoyed this passionate poem. Good work. Loyd
I am speechless Laurie... truly, what can I say, what can Lynda say...what can anybody say...? ! ? ! ? ! ?
And every woman who reads this will wish it was She this poem had been written for. Ah, Laurie, you have a way of making us women with poet hearts fall in love with your words and you. Lovely, just lovely.