Wednesday, May 27, 2009

In Your Camaro Comments

Rating: 5.0

I reach over to touch you.
I kiss you.
You hold me against you.
The sound you make.
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Toni Bellanger
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Shekhar Joshi 07 June 2009

passion at its passionate best........excellent ;)

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well. i didnt expect it.. but i was quite pleased.. nice

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Shashendra Amalshan 04 June 2009

hey i see you ve changed the frame...i know i commented before...just read it again....now this poem has turned from a nice passionate poem to a great passionate one...liked it very much..... and felt it too....coooll... with lots of love to you, your prince charming and his camaro.. shan

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Karamia Smith 01 June 2009

a wonderful tale of passion. it is beautiful!

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Jazz Annis 31 May 2009

so very cool...i like it...10+

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Ency Bearis 28 May 2009

such passion well narrated and happened in Camaro...words pictured it well...

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Herbert Nehrlich2 28 May 2009

Well expressed passion, no doubt. The format of the poem however is (to me) totally unacceptable. H

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Shashendra Amalshan 27 May 2009

well my ex camee in a small lady vagon tho but we didnt do anything..you know the tension was there but not the chemistry..lol..nice one

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Toni Bellanger

Toni Bellanger

Detroit, MI
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