Monday, April 14, 2008

In Your Arms Comments

Rating: 3.5

You held me tight in your arms
You told me things will be fine
Then i became your lucky charm
You said i am your everything
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Innocent Angel Mendoza
COMMENTS
K. V. Venkataramana 04 May 2008

Beautiful poem, Mendoza. I liked it.

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Suicide King 15 April 2008

A little short, I think you can expand it, but a very good concept.

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