Sunday, August 12, 2012

In Your Absence Comments

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I loved you as a dew-drop,
loves buds to help,
Them to bloom, a bird
loves the sky, the grass-hopper,
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Neela Nath Das
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Unwritten Soul 23 August 2012

This is a screen of feeling where we may see what we felt and we feel what we have seen..lke it :) _Unwritten Soul

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Valerie Dohren 17 August 2012

A beautiful write Nil, very inspired and lovely.

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Kelly Seale 17 August 2012

...Absence. Yes! My lips said the word in a hushed whisper, trailing when you ended. What a marvelous effect. I must try this, yes, if you don't mind me borrowing the effect. Great Write Nilakshi... Great Write! Love It! -Kelly.

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Robert Wynn 14 August 2012

That's really cool, magical write, please sign the guest book on my new web site betterthingsbegin.com Thanks Nilakshi.

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Kasia Fedyk 12 August 2012

Amazing and so incredibly beautiful Nila sometimes I have no words to describe the feeling but in silence heart flies and reaches its destination to tell. Love you, Kasi

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