Monday, November 4, 2013

In Your Absence Comments

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It`s night, in the middle of July
The moon shines the sky
But even though this night is beautiful
The only person I love is still out there, missing.
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Vlad Mutuleanu
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Liliana ~el 04 November 2013

Absolutely incredible, wonderful, and very powerful! ! Instills deep and moving feeling since the very beginning. July is important just as the summer months always are. The miles between us Have made me a poet Otherwise, in your presence, I´m silent as a feather. I love you But I don`t know how to say it, It seems that words Lack what`s necessary. The power of my love Lies only in my heart, So to put it into words... My need to fill the absence of 'you' has seen me take to the pens and notebooks. How would I act if I were with 'you'? Jumping and twirling in bursting joy and glee? Perhaps standing quiet and tearing for the bliss I perceive. I know how to tell 'you' and what to say. I'm not at a loss of words but rather caught in the wave of time constantly wrestling me. My words are deep. They can be powerful and strong. But what I need is time with 'you.' Maybe even a hug? I love 'you, ' but at this point, what are words but just my ramblings? I've often decided to leave it at I love 'you.' I love 'you' because you are amazing. Really amazing. The power of love is with me everyday. To put my experiences with and feelings for 'you' could possibly take a decade. To put these into words would be a great and powerful record that would prove, to generations to come, my love for 'you' and the immense influence 'you' have been for me. Thank you so much for inspiring me to reflect and spill these words! !

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