Little
rose,
roselet,
at times,
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suddenly my feet touch your feet and my mouth your lips: you have grown, your shoulders rise like two hills, your wander over my breast, ..............................Amazing words, beautiful and bit and that from the famous Neruda, WOW! Congratulations to the family of the great poet. May he Rest in peace. God Blesses.
my word E.R.O.T.I.C. is censored, look above, empty space, byt this word must be in between those two words....bit e.r.o.t.i.c. and that for the Great Neruda. I have seen and observed, IF I write this in this way, no censor at all. Thank you!
suddenly my feet touch your feet and my mouth your lips: ...............
Beautiful poem. Love the way immensity is looked from a tiny prism, widening, rising high to embrace the cosmos.
in love you loosened yourself like sea water! What a fantastic conceptualization?
Little rose, roselet, at times, tiny and naked, it seems as though you would fit in one of my hands, beautiful and simple the great Neruda
This is a beautiful poem on love and nature having thrilling expression.
Tiny and naked! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
wow awesome embrace of love- uddenly my feet touch your feet and my mouth your lips: you have grown, .......................//
My poem is way better, it goes like this Are you ready kids? Aye Aye Captain I can't hear you! AYE AYE CAPTAIN Oohh... Who lives in a pineapple under the sea? Spongebob Squarepants Absorbant and yellow and porous is he! Spongebob Squarepants If nautical nonsense be something you wish Spongebob Squarepants Then drop on the deck and flop like a fish! Spongebob Squarepants READY? Spongebob Squarepants Spongebob Squarepants Spongebob Squarepants
in love you loosened yourself like sea water: I can scarcely measure the sky’s most spacious eyes and I lean down to your mouth to kiss the earth. Beautiful poem. Nicely written.
Not bad for a modern Romantic, in some of the best poems in Spanish ever written and in modernity clad.