Thursday, March 5, 2009

In You Presence Comments

Rating: 5.0

In your presence I discovered my name
My name that was hidden under the pain of separetion
I discovered the eyes, no long veiled with fever
Your laghter, like a flame piercing shadows
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Kurt Behle
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Mimi Fakhira 09 March 2009

Emotion stirred with a combination of words, the lines are filled with meanings. Great work! 10...

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Katrina Pilon 09 March 2009

it means alot its very emotion and tells how u feel

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