Tuesday, August 19, 2008

In You My God…. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh god….
You are so charm and kind
And the vibrant spark of my life...
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Jazib Kamalvi 01 December 2017

A great start with a nice poem, sajini. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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rohit sapra 20 February 2009

Faith in god is a very essential component of life as it is faith which gives hope of surviving in this journey called life. You have expressed yourself well in your poem.

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Rangarajan Kazhiyur Mannar 05 September 2008

The very first verse of yours in this portal is a fitting invocation to God and I could fathom the truth in your heart when it poured out this fine piece of poetry. A great beginning! Wishing you the Best.

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Kesav Easwaran 21 August 2008

a good composition on overwhelming faith...to equate Divinity to a place recreational for body and mind looks good...the play ground indicating the vastness, infinite... an impressive poem, Sajini... i give you 10

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June30 Tara 19 August 2008

no prayer goes unanswered... nicely penned... Love...Tara

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