In You My God…. Comments
Oh god….
You are so charm and kind
And the vibrant spark of my life...
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Faith in god is a very essential component of life as it is faith which gives hope of surviving in this journey called life. You have expressed yourself well in your poem.
The very first verse of yours in this portal is a fitting invocation to God and I could fathom the truth in your heart when it poured out this fine piece of poetry. A great beginning! Wishing you the Best.
a good composition on overwhelming faith...to equate Divinity to a place recreational for body and mind looks good...the play ground indicating the vastness, infinite... an impressive poem, Sajini... i give you 10
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7/24/2025 1:23:34 PM # 1.0.0
A great start with a nice poem, sajini. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks