Thursday, April 26, 2018

In Writing You Made A Garden Of Eternity Comments

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Blueness; you are munificent, your bosom is opened,
Your opera is cleaned and translucent.
Full moon; you allocates moonlit generously,
Day light; you also allot shining liberally,
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Susan Williams 27 April 2018

Before I comment on your poem, I want to comment on your About. It painted a good portrait of you and a charming one too. Truthfulness is often charming. I will have to read your poem I think several times before I understand the complexity of this tribute to Shakespeare but I can say right now I love the texture of the words you have chosen to use

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mahtab bangalee 28 April 2018

Dear Susan Williams thanks for your reading

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