Thursday, November 26, 2015

In What Sense I Am I Comments

Rating: 4.1

In what sense
I am I
a minor observer
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Carl Rakosi
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Susan Williams 10 February 2016

It is like he paints scenery for a play that will be performed but the scenes and references do not cohere. I am not at all sure what this poem is about- but it is about a human soul that seems to exist in the real world but also sidesteps into a dream state. Is the woman a muse or interior paramour, trapped.?

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Kim Barney 10 February 2016

Fascinating poem as if looking into someone else's dream.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 10 February 2016

A wonderful poem with rhyme and intriguing as also thought provoking too. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 February 2016

A minor observer! Thanks for sharing.

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