Inwaiting. Comments

very good suspense will he ever come but hopes remain in GOD'S DOMAIN may be he will change his mind and come GOD BLESS YE O POETESS well done

Waiting for a loved one though he did not come but love makes one still hopeful. A nice picture of human sentiments.

Good poem and thanks to share it.impressive work and we'll penned.

'Promise me To stand by my side And hold my hands Before I melt into the fading light At the horizon's end. '..is a the most beautiful stanza here. Emotionally powerful poem. Loved the simple way you have spilled your feelings.10+++

A nice write...... . ..... Naila

Waiting needs value, Nice to share mam.10p

Good..Thnks for sharing.....

Nice poem...........................................

Hi Bharati, Very poignant poem.. Waiting is very painful, but at the same time equally pleasant, as each moment of waiting is pregnant with hope of reunion and expectation. You have expressed this with profound emotions..

Lovely poem..love is waiting for the union

I will be surprised! ! ! Love and art! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Superb poem on hope, When waiting period is too long we all tend to think otherwise and the end is awesome where the hope has reached to its ultimate and promise takes over.....Amusing 10++++++++++

A fascinating poem! Delightful poetic expression filled with poetic beauty beckoning a sweet promise of love! I liked the third stanza most.........................10

Love has given much patience to wait. After a long day's waiting a temporary break is taken by stopping this but still there is hope that moment of arrival and meeting will come with lovable memories. Sweet melodies and wonderful gifts are received emotionally. Dear has given promise to meet before sunset and we hope he will come. He will promise to stand near love. His sudden coming will give surprise. An excellent poem is well penned on life and love...10