In Vast Sky Comments

liked it D Singh28 minutes ago great poem. Worth reading Comment +1

i fly inside and over the sky... Papoulias Ioannis25 minutes ago ?a??sp??a

Enjoyed Sue Green26 minutes ago Your work is written with heart. I enjoyed the read Thank You Comment +1

Leslie Philibert9 minutes ago I know you will ignore what I say, but here goes. As ever, you miss the articles....the sky. Rhymed poetry needs lines of the same length, and syllable count. Poetry is such a medium is grammatically correct. I see no sense in the rhyme scheme. It hops about. As you don`t bother to improve your work, I will not waste my time reading it in future. Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago best of luck to you dear

I want to fly, very good writing sir.