Marvin Tordillos

Marvin Tordillos

Brgy. Kalinawan, Jaro, Leyte, Phillipines
Monday, February 19, 2018

In Valentine's Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

First day of school they've kick my ass,
My evil classmates bully me in class,
Mark, Jason and Jaime totally sucks,
Those good for nothing fellows as bad as their socks.
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Marvin Tordillos
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Naila Rais 10 September 2018

A wonderful poetry...... Keep it up....10++++++++...loved reading it.... You may like to read my poem Fragrance of my love too..... Naila

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Bipasha D 19 February 2018

A sweet love poem flows really well. Really enjoyable. Rated 10

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Cheryl Tutaan 19 February 2018

Wow! kaka kilig po! :) The first stanza really made me laugh, mga pinoy talaga :) I love the character being portrayed, very catchy, full of humor and truly a heartfelt...The rhythm and rhyming of words are perfect! I enjoyed reading your piece, Marvin...I rate it 10+++++++ You would also visit my My First Love thank you... Cheryl♡

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Marvin Tordillos

Marvin Tordillos

Brgy. Kalinawan, Jaro, Leyte, Phillipines
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