Saturday, November 7, 2009

In Two Minds Comments

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John William Henry Barthrop wrote.
In iambic pentameter
an amusing suicide note
Stuck it on the water heater.
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ivor or ivor.e hogg
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Susan Jarvis 07 November 2009

What a wry, dry wit you have, Ivor. I love the idea that someone (other than Shakespeare, of course) would write a suicide note in iambic pentameter, and the final line had me in stitches. I will admit to mistaking 'discontented' for 'disconnected', but it lost none of its impact as a result. A fantastic poem! S :)

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