Sunday, December 16, 2012

In Too Deep Comments

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The weapon you used against me
That left me powerless
That made me blind:
Your lips.
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Tiger Lily Love
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Alla Simone 23 December 2012

Captivaing from beginning to end. I would have done anything for you As long as we sealed it With a single sinful kiss That's my fav. line. I didn't want to open my eyes I didnt want to see People do exactly what they want. Unfortunately in some cases. Love it cuz I lived it. Thanks.

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Aria Siren 17 December 2012

I really like this poem. It's very visual and engaging. Holding my hand Hands in my hair Like a puppet on strings I would have done anything for you It was only when I started drowning That I realized I was in way too deep All examples of the clear picture you paint. Excellent job Tiger. You keep impressing me!

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