Tuesday, October 13, 2009

In Time Comments

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Wanting everything to just stop in time.
Wishing everything to go back to the way things were.
Waiting for things to fall back into place.
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Nicole Gehrman
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Aldo Kraas 14 October 2009

Your poem is fine, but you made a mistake on the word everyday. you wrote as two words. It is not two words. It is one word. You won't find everyday as two words in the dictionary, you can look up in the dictionary. yes if you are refering to a song that is a different thing all together.

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Colfax, Wisconsin
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