Will you come, oh, my Lord?
To touch and heal my bleeding heart
When I sob in suppressed agony,
Ease my heart, so torn apart
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You really capture a mood...that once believed permanent slipping away. A remarkable verse, Valsa. And congratulations on the poem of the day.
An excellent praise to the Lord. A poem with brilliant rhymes. A fantastic Devotional for this Holy week. This is especially for the members of the Roman Catholic Church.. As for the Protestants too, in a different way, the same devoted attitude. I have enjoyed very much your magnificent praise so loveliest worded, Valsa. God's Blessings.
. Lord, I keep my door wide open And with a garland I wait for Thee To you, I surrender all my life! Oh! Come, my Lord to reside in me! .......A prayer to God from the deepest heart is touchingly expressed. This is really a beautiful devotional poem.10
Wonderful prayer- - Your poems take one to higher level of spirituality.
Very beautiful poem from your pen Valsa. Very positive lines... To you, I surrender all my life! Oh! Come, my Lord to reside in me. Loved reading each lines..
beautifully written. This prayer comes straight from heart. May lord carry us all through.
Lord, I keep my door wide open And with a garland I wait for Thee To you, I surrender all my life! Oh! Come, my Lord to reside in me! If we can surrender our soul to God, His divine grace shall steer us from within and dispelling all darkness that cloud our eyes. I too wish to bridge this chasm gradually and yet at the earliest. Excellent write.
Come Lord Reside in me In my agony Set me free; Cleanse my soul Restore my brain Fill its holes Ease my pain; Let me bask In your light Fill my heart With delight; For in your silence There is only doubt Am I a madman? Why do I shout.?
To you, I surrender all my life! Oh! Come, my Lord to reside in me! A beautiful invocation to the Lord who took all the pain to give us peace. Thank you for the nicely composed poem.
..........A humble prayer that comes straight from your heart..............may it be answered soon...............amen.... - -Blessings in abundance............. - May god bless you -Regards
Hmmm.... With your wonderful comment, you have imparted a rare sheen to my poem, Marie! ....... I don't have words enough to express my gratitude! !
A beautiful entreaty to the Lord. So well confessed and expressed. Surely such a heart-felt prayer will be heard by God Most High. Just beautiful! ! ! ! !
Invocation of God is a delight in ascent indeed..........Valsa.......the piece is refreshing and inspiring................. great composition as always.....
beautiful words of devotion and lasting love for the Almighty.
Beautiful prayer. I surrender to you Lord with my whole heart.....