Monday, April 14, 2008

In Thought Comments

Rating: 5.0

Is it my reluctance to ignore my friends that annoys them
is it my laziness or my procrastinator ways
Buried under the weight of everyone else, trying to balance their lives
maybe I should forget them, but that wouldn't be in my character
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Izik Alcox
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Drishti Magoo 07 December 2008

i won't say that its a well structured poem but well that is how it portrays your feelings while writing this poem...the unstructured sense of life that u feel u r leading... too many fears and emotions and an effort to rationalise them which further renders you miserable. once again.. it speaks my mind! my poem In The MID.. is somewat like a second stage of this poem /the corresponding life...

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