In those moments Rachel was delirious
With wish visiting a fortune-teller
Whose clairvoyance had amazed her
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A lovely dedication, you seem inspired to have come up with those lines, 'When she felt it coming on a kind of frantic obsession/ Captured her which she could control only if she found/ Some angelic verses to soothe her conscience...'.
Obsession and conscience...fine rhymes and well chosen diction....Loved it!