Saturday, September 26, 2009

In Those Moments Rachel Was Delirious Comments

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In those moments Rachel was delirious
With wish visiting a fortune-teller
Whose clairvoyance had amazed her
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Catrina Heart 29 September 2009

Obsession and conscience...fine rhymes and well chosen diction....Loved it!

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Nizamettin Esen Haymanali 28 September 2009

Beautiful verses well penned.10.

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Obinna Eruchie 26 September 2009

A lovely dedication, you seem inspired to have come up with those lines, 'When she felt it coming on a kind of frantic obsession/ Captured her which she could control only if she found/ Some angelic verses to soothe her conscience...'.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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