Wednesday, November 13, 2013

In Those Moments Comments

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As I close my eyes when I am alone
To understand the thoughts of mind
Thoughts like seeds which once were sown
As days of my life I rewind
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kanav justa
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Lyn Paul 30 November 2013

Ache my soul only to find What great words. Love this write.

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 November 2013

Poem with in-depth meaning. Self assessment is very good. There is nothing better that judging self. Loved reading it Kanav. Thanks for this beautiful write.

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Queeny Gona 16 November 2013

In-depth read and sounds very philosophical dear poet pal.

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Heather Wilkins 15 November 2013

it does not matter what we think the things that counts is the things we do lovely thought and so true.

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Payal Parande 14 November 2013

its not the year or month or day we should count its the moments that should get counted by us cause we live them the most in past in future and now.... bravo sir

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Hazel Durham 14 November 2013

To solve our own actions and mixed up feelings of pain that is all so real, when friends fail us, we then fail ourselves, by allowing their negativity to consume us and destroy our joy and to look at the world with wonder and love in our hearts to give the best of ourselves is all we can do! Loved this deep and powerful write!

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Danny Draper 14 November 2013

Introspection is a good quality to who ourselves with honestly. The many forces in our life's journey need consideration for the whole of our lives.

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Valsa George 14 November 2013

Self introspection leads to self correction and renewal! The tragedy of human life is the absence of love! When our hearts are filled with love, peace and joy emanate! But as we are frail, again hatred and jealousy, pride and arrogance find their way to our hearts! Repeated efforts for renewal can leave us good human beings! Enjoyed your poem, Kanav!

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Kee Thampi 14 November 2013

very good poem real pictures from life But it does not matter what we think The things that counts are the things we do

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 13 November 2013

Ongoing human tragedy/calamities are well depicted though this poem a lovely write thank you Kanav God bless you

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