Monday, January 13, 2003
In This World Comments
Rating: ★3.6
In this world
we walk on the roof of hell,
gazing at flowers.
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Kim Barney
27 December 2015
Wow. Susan Williams is right. What a contrast! This is the very best kind of haiku - - - where the last line surprises you and contrasts from the rest of the poem.
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Susan Williams
27 December 2015
Oh, I am absolutely stunned by the contrast here- -WoW! ! ! !
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7/29/2025 3:43:59 AM # 1.0.0
ain't this one a wowser! and in just fifteen syllables! can you find a better expression of the bittersweet experience that is being human? -glen kappy