Wednesday, February 1, 2006

In This Soft Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

In this soft night thread
A necklace of stars
And wear it in remembrance
Of moments that never will be.
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Tan Pratonix
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Katherine Pinero 26 November 2016

Your poem relates to the pain that I have experienced, Of moments that will never be, ouch

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Willow Moon Pearce 09 February 2006

Hi Tan, this I enjoyed a lot.................keep it going, , , , , , , , , , , willow

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Sandra Fowler 08 February 2006

Sorrow reflected in tranquillity. Praise for your excellent poem. Kindest regards, Sandra Fowler

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Philippa Lane 08 February 2006

I agree with Evie - beautiful and enjoyable.

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Evie Bryce 07 February 2006

beautiful really enjoyed it

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