Tuesday, June 5, 2018

In This Room Comments

Rating: 5.0

A severe sadness has entered the room.
Cold, dark and sinister.
Now we find we cannot see
where we are going.
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Smoky Hoss
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Glen Kappy 02 July 2018

hey, smoky! it's been a while since i visited your poems, but here i am today, and chose to read this one first—which i like. to the last line and the conviction throughout, amen! two things came to mind right away—my latest posting cottontail which has some of the same convictions and a favorite statement from romans in the kjv that abraham hoped against hope. on to the next poem, glen

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Bernard F. Asuncion 06 June 2018

Smoky, such a well expressed poem....10+++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 June 2018

Hope remains and love wins. This poem is definitely an amazing poem very brilliantly penned...10

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Robert Murray Smith 05 June 2018

Smoky, my friend you sure do go on. Now, the poem has wrung itself dry it can cry. Good write. ++10

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