Wednesday, November 25, 2015

In This New Beam Comments

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I rise with new hope daily
At morning I promise sure
To have this pure life
I perform my right action.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Isabel Pimentel 18 October 2020

I love to see daily new beam of fresh sunrise. This poem is very lovely one.

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Valsa George 06 May 2020

Having wisdom I judge them This new beam is a measure....... Many thoughts come to us- both good and bad. But using our wisdom we choose the right ones and direct our lives. This wisdom of discretion is given to us by God Almighty! Thus the new ray of light kindles our minds and lives alike. This is indeed a short lovely poem! A sure 10

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I rise with a new hope. Great. I think it is not only waking up but you are rising like a sun....10

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 January 2016

In this new beam of love! With the wisdom of life. Nice work.

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Hazel Durham 01 December 2015

Beautiful write about life as we all see a new beam that makes us see the goodness that is still in this world and to give our love is a gift from God!

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M Asim Nehal 26 November 2015

We all get warmness of love by reading your beautiful poems on nature......Thanks for sharing. Sir.10+++

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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