Rain falls like a silver glass shimmer
Swishing, sweeping, slipping, sliding
Over bushes and onto roofs and splattering on
Heads
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hi gina.. lid da poem..it was nice... even i had some dat kinda feelin.. but i wrote a ll bit diff.. on rain.. u cn chck it out and lemme lnow..wt u think of dat..
Pure enchantment. Praise for your lovely rainscape.Write on, gina. Warmest regards, Sandra
This poem made me feel alive. Well done.