Saturday, September 23, 2017

In This Lonely Road Comments

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In this lonely road of hope,
Tranquillity was ruling,
Wild plans had grown beside,
Dawn had whispered a word.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Kalpana Barik 04 October 2020

This lonely road whispers many things. Green plants bloom in love. A nice picture you have captured.

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Jazib Kamalvi 24 September 2017

Write comment. An impressive poetic atmosphere is created in this poem. Thanks

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Valsa George 24 September 2017

I can feel the freshness of the morning described with plants trespassing into the open space of the road and the lorry speeding along the bend, making it not so visible for anyone standing in the road...! I love the way you have given a metaphoric twist to this lorry as Lorry of Life... at the end!

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Unwritten Soul 24 September 2017

This poem fit well with this beautiful captured photo, the shades of cool, and the essence of calm exist in both poem and photo make this as a best compliment work togther from you :) well done

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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