Monday, December 7, 2009

In This Life Comments

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In this life, we need insight to follow the light
In this life, we must do just what is right
In this life, for many survival is a fight
In this life, for some comfort is out of sight
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Clarence Prince
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Khairul Ahsan 21 April 2018

'In this life, belief will bring us relief.' - A strong belief and motivation helps us reach decisions. Liked Bri Edwards comments.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 December 2016

Insight to follow the light of the truth! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bri Edwards 11 June 2016

i liked the repetition of the rhyming line at the end of each stanza. this is one line i disagreed with, though it is a nice thought i guess. this also sounds nice (even disregarding the nice rhymes) : In this life, we need His mercy and grace In this life, let the Lord be your brace In this life, however hard be your case Make no waste, but with Him keep the pace In this life, we must do just what is right.............what happens if we don't do just what is right i wonder. i'd 'like' to read just one poem by Clarence in which he sides with the Devil, but that wouldn't be Clarence! i guess the devilish poems are ones i'll have to write. :) this poem is bound to end up in my/our June 2016 'showcase for PH poets, found in my list of poems on my PH site. thanks Clarence. bri :)

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Rachel Butler 18 July 2015

War - A Whisper On A Summer Breeze, you show devotion in these words to your beliefs.

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