In This Cool Morning Comments

yes lovely poem but imagine mine I woke up this morn no sun was born clouds stood anchored in the sky but can anyone tell me why the snows were loaded like coal on a truck overloaded neither the truck moves back nor forward no birds whistled no not a sound all about me were sleeping sound bang the door did someone are you all dead asked a voice 'tis 1 pm

I appreciate the spirit of this poem! Well penned....10