In Their Hands Comments

A good metaphor, almost as old as chess itself. You should read C.S. Lewis's fantasy novel, The Great Divorce. It has something for you. Keep writing. :)

Cool write, the mat of black and white, life moves and oh, but life could be more harder than a chess...check mate! ! ! we maybe meet but at least something to greet...so what i can say it's cool write keep writing with more Haha=creative write! _Unwritten Soul

Welcome to PH! ! ! ! Fantastic first poem.. great metaphors and imagery....keep them coming! ! ! SG xo