Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, November 7, 2013

In Their Company Comments

Rating: 3.0

“You are stupid” he blasted
“You have no lead”
He was shivering with rage
I was listening to person from bonded cage
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 November 2013

wonderful imagery Kristine Mannone7 minutes ago Love your imagery makes me imagine I'm there. Comment +1 good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 November 2013

Anna Laurencio7 minutes ago good read Comment +1 Discusses the nature of congeniality and it's mistranslation

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 November 2013

Sacred Warrior1 minute ago Oh so it is a real word.. wonders! okay liked it except imho the last stanza could be dropped entirely or needs reworked.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 November 2013

“You are stupid” he blasted “You have no lead”

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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