In Thee I Trust Comments

I full appreciate the sentiments shown in your poem. Good thoughts. But how to take your poem and make it better? I'd suggest a line by line edits. Doing so m seem a lot of work but the final result will be worth the effort. The content you write about means your final version might turn out to be inspirational. How not to make that extra effort? Best wishes

Wonderful poem written with great skill. The poem is rich in imagery and style. I am impressed. Well taken. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal