Tuesday, February 14, 2012

In The Words Of Bluesman Jack Comments

Rating: 4.3

From bar to bar
I play my life story
to the crowd
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Dave Alan Walker
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Smoky Hoss 25 July 2017

Blue is the color of salvation....

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Summer Huggins 22 February 2012

i like this thank you for shareing! and thank you for reading my poems and leaving a comment ;)

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(De Va) 22 February 2012

this is wonderful, your poetry always paints a picture for me to view. blessings...

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Ruby Juniper 20 February 2012

Enjoyed reading this. I think it expresses the spirit of the blues really well.

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Smoky Hoss 17 February 2012

This is great Dave! Should be a song for sure!

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 17 February 2012

Great poem big brother, as always you painted a clear picture...truly loved it.

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Renu Kakkar 17 February 2012

good poem..a picture emerges as one reads...

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Willie Walker 16 February 2012

This poem makes me wonder if you been reading my mail Dave. I been there. I done that. When I sing, I sing the blues. Comes from poverty. Comes from pain. Comes from missing those who won't come again. Seems we call out when need. Seems we sing the blues and we bleed. Hearts we hurt. Not really news. Another reason we sing the blues.

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Gift Macozoma 16 February 2012

Every line draws a good picture, good phrasing

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Von Klassique 16 February 2012

Wonderful, sorrowful Poem. Good write. please, check my new poem: Today Tomorrow. thanks.

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Daniel Kuetsinya 15 February 2012

Sir, you're a great poet. This is a splendid work. Well done, all the same I invite you to read my poem entitled 'Another Chance'.

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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 15 February 2012

this is very beautiful...i love it...kudos....keep it up, , , the blue of salvation pls read my new poem....2B or not 2b......thanks for sharing

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Kalpak Kaplash 15 February 2012

nice poem....great write....keep writing

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Kalpak Kaplash 15 February 2012

nice poem....great write....keep writing

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Juan Olivarez 15 February 2012

I love this poem. It says a lot in so few words. worthy of a ten.

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Marites C. Cayetano 15 February 2012

thanks for inviting me to read your poem, it's beautiful, and sad. thanks also for the comment.

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Eric Cockrell 14 February 2012

the old blind man sits on the street corner playing his guitar... throw some change in his cup, he'll give you his heart! great poem!

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Ewel 777 14 February 2012

great :) sounds like song :)

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Heather Stanton 14 February 2012

Hi Dave, Thank you taking the time to Read my poem and offering me to read yours

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Tsira Gogeshvili 14 February 2012

Very beautiful and melodious, almost a high-grade blues I hear in ears... If they (my ears) not lies to me Thanks for the comment Tsira

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