Monday, March 13, 2017

In The Woods Comments

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I am lost in the woods where the path is a maze,
and still I will stay till the sun starts to fade,
where no one can find me in shadow and haze,
with safety of darkness to come to my aid.
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Barry Middleton
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Dimitrios Galanis 15 March 2017

For hope is elusive when lost in the woods, where darkness confirms much I misunderstood. =The two verses function as a crown to the whole work.

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Barry Middleton 15 March 2017

I am not sure what I meant but they are thought provoking lines I think and the rhythm is nice. Thanks Dimitrios.

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