In The Winter's Bough Comments

Hi Asavri, Very heartfelt write.. Once you feel my pain You will not be able to return To your soul's kingdom..... A drop of tears dries in my eyes Into very soft ice Does not dare to look into your eyes Fearing, it may melt my heart....

thanks for sharing.. and remember: everyone who reads you poetry enters your own Universe -even if for a while- Through poetry, we (the all of us who read your lines) are in touch.. and viceversa... Keep on writing! Fabrizio

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

Exquisite! Lovely! Insightful! A beautiful encapsulation of well articulated train of thoughts penned down in poetic diction. Another addition to my favourite. I have read you other two poems, there are very good too. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MZANSI AND THE BALLOT BOX.

so young, but so good already. Nice poem. Keep on writing!

Great imaginary and work which you are doing. You have the capability to analyze the things with fresh symbols. You are writing free verse poetry but it is rhythmic. You have the great ideas at this little age. Keep it up! God Bless You.

Now that I'm on the edge Of every place I saw In the middle of dark world I can't see anything A very beautiful poem on winter in its entirety how winter comes and sheds its shadow on all Wonderful Well expressed.Well done Keep it up Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

I see all the essentials of a good poetry in this write. Lovely thoughts, lovely use of words, lovely flow of lines and overall the music, I am sure a good singer can sing this sweet song in a very attractive tune. Asavri I congratulate you for this poem, if you continue in this lovely style I hope very soon you will become a popular poetess.....10

Beautiful poem. Amazing. So vivid in imagination and style. It talks so beautifully about life's dreams, hopes, despair and courage all in one breath. Thank you Asavri for sharing and thank you so much for your comment on my recent poem. Best wishes.

Beautiful poem about the life's poignant situations from which one tries to wriggle out unhurt. Thanks Asavriji.