Saturday, October 25, 2008

(in The Wind) Comments

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Today….
I made an anklet of kowhai
Yellows blooms of sigh..
I thought of your toesies
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A little poem in big wind. Very different and clever write with humor capturing your thoughts. Well done! Karin Anderson

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Simone Inez Harriman 14 January 2009

Your pen flows with the wind and designs some real visual beauties.

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Joseph Daly 26 October 2008

A great poem. I feel a bit voyeuristic reading it because it seems to transcend the fact that it is 'out there'. It really is a gem of a piece. The term 'toesies' and then the last line following, is a real touch of skill.

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