Wednesday, June 10, 2009

In The Whisperings Of The Pines Comments

Rating: 2.0

The voices of the past surround us
From a forgotten, distant time.
Past generations send their songs to us
In the whisperings of the pines.
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Jim Scallan
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Stephen Stirk 11 June 2009

A lovely melodious poem that creates panoramic pictures in the mind. Again I love the imagery. It's a mystical poem that speaks.(I see you've fallen victim to one of those secret low scorers who bravely pounce - without revealing their identity, then disapper into the night) . I don't score poetry because I'm not a teacher but this is worth an 17.5 out of 10 Best Steve

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