‘in The Wave-Strike Over Unquiet Stones’ Comments

Merged, you and I, my love, seal the silence while the sea destroys its continual forms, .....we bear the sole, relentless tenderness/// excellent, most expressive; we the human, the being of tolerance everything in continual destruction of life; in this poem the deep struggle of human is hidden through the destroyer sea waves// great poem penned

the brightness bursts and bears the rose and the ring of water contracts to a cluster....This poem is very interestingly penned and a nice modern poem of the day is chosen.

Pole, hole, whole! We bear the sole. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

O magnolia radiance breaking in spume, magnetic voyager whose death flowers and returns, eternal, to being and nothingness: shattered brine, dazzling leap of the ocean. Magnificent!

In the wave-strike over unquiet stones the brightness bursts and bears the rose and the ring of water contracts to a cluster to one drop of azure brine that falls. What an imagery these words are able to conjure up! Magical,

My hero for all the times, my endless love out of the time, I have been in his home sea on earth

Free style yet very striking emotion. Liked it

A different style too descriptive and beautiful is Pablo Neruda's...like a lot- 10

“In the Wave-Strike Over Unquiet Stones”, expresses how romantic love fades. Like the waves of the ocean, Neruda expresses romantic love ebbing and flowing. [Tambl]

Beautifully written and gorgeous imagery invoked by this brilliant write!

Awesome I like this poem, check mine out 

we bear the sole, relentless tenderness: How profound! !

I really regret Pablo Neruda's death, the more poems he could have written!

we bear the sole, relentless tenderness- -my best line

we bear the sole, relentless tenderness- -my best line

So much here but I especially like the phrase ' collapses its turrets of wildness and whiteness'.

Amazing and beautiful, he painted his love in a very sweet voice of creativity

Poems such as this literally take my breath away...such exquisite imagery, staggering yet reveals another aspect of nature & love; Neruda is such a beautiful poet, sane and perceptive, sober yet taken with divine eloquence...