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In The Waters Beauty Glides Comments

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In the waters
Beauty glides
In the waters
Draws in tides
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Emmanuel George Cefai
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Daniel Brick 02 May 2015

Three times Beauty is invoked performing some action, namely gliding, thriving, hiding. I don't know how far to take the connotations of these words. Gliding fits the waterscape in which the poem is set. Thriving contains the waterscape, but also stretches outside the poem to everywhere Beauty is manifest. And then the biggest surprise - Beauty hides. But why? These three seemingly neutral statements gives the poem an unexpected dimension, call it a wrinkle in an otherwise untroubled scene.

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Emmanuel George Cefai

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