In The Volume Of Narratives Comments
One day I was walking in the wind
And clouds gathered around me into a storm
In the volume of narratives, I met one stormy Joe
Who was seeking the demystifying alternative
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Wonderful metaphors and images. It all boils down to fairh. If you believe you don't question, but the non believer is the harbinger of progress and new ideas. The problem with faith is always that it shuts your mind to other ideas because of straightjacketed strictures. Great lyrical poem.
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7/18/2025 9:12:13 AM # 1.0.0
Hmm...just musing. I would have made verse two a little different than verse 1 to home in the point, then tied everything with the chorus at the end. Like in music lyrics.
This the beauty of intrigue in poetry. It allows others to think alternatively. Thank you my brother for your comment