Tuesday, August 20, 2013

In The Void Of Darkness Comments

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When darkness falls over
We, accustomed to light, falter.
The shining smiles on our beautiful faces fade
Our hearts hang but beating only faint
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Thomas Duncky
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Patricia Grantham 26 August 2013

Darkness comes as a state of gloom and eerie shadows. The Emotions takes on a different dimension when it comes. But do not despair the light will soon appear and the darkness will flee as the morning dew. Loved this. Please read my poem Then Comes the Night.

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Dave Walker 20 August 2013

A great poem, like it, a great write.

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