Saturday, May 2, 2009

...In The Valley Of My Mind Comments

Rating: 4.1

I carry black roses
Of what that has been
Rain drops wet my floor
To many cold night
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Eyan Desir
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Howard Kern 17 May 2009

very ethereal keep on plugin!

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Obinna Eruchie 16 May 2009

pain and pleasure in the mind of love lost. the poem has a good imagery.

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 12 May 2009

In the valley of my mind - beautiful Eyan...where precious moments, even after the pain, can be stored....

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Linda Ori 08 May 2009

The mind is a powerful thing. If not for hopes and dreams, we would never attempt anything. You make the choices that define your life - 'in the valley of your mind'. Nice write, Eyan Linda :)

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Joseph Poewhit 08 May 2009

The mind really has unlimited potentials

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Lynda Robson 08 May 2009

Nice write Eyan, the valley of the mind is capable of anything, 10 Lynda xx

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Patricia Dashwood 08 May 2009

romantic..more verses please

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Rajaram Ramachandran 07 May 2009

A loveable desire in the valley of the poet's mind.

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Goran Gustafsson 07 May 2009

The bottom line is that what we call reality is a kind of fiktion composed of our brain/mind. Nice romantic writing.

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Roshni D'Souza 07 May 2009

Nice read...touching and melancholic in a way! I like the idea of the black roses.

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 07 May 2009

Very touching romantic read...........In the valley of mind, you wrote words of romantic kind........A Good Write.....................

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Naidz Ladia 04 May 2009

a nice expression of love..tho it is only happening in ur imagination but at least it helps to ease ur loneliness..the fact is; ; not everything we want, we get.......naizz

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Saadat Tahir 03 May 2009

wow hold on... you came on so touching and strong great lines very very appealing and identifiable superb write cheers

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rago rago 03 May 2009

Amazing lines and thoroughly enjoyed reading.......... thank you for your kind sharing.

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Janell Cressman 02 May 2009

AWESOME poem! ! ! ! ! this poem was worth the wait! ! ! !

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