I carry black roses
Of what that has been
Rain drops wet my floor
To many cold night
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pain and pleasure in the mind of love lost. the poem has a good imagery.
In the valley of my mind - beautiful Eyan...where precious moments, even after the pain, can be stored....
The mind is a powerful thing. If not for hopes and dreams, we would never attempt anything. You make the choices that define your life - 'in the valley of your mind'. Nice write, Eyan Linda :)
Nice write Eyan, the valley of the mind is capable of anything, 10 Lynda xx
The bottom line is that what we call reality is a kind of fiktion composed of our brain/mind. Nice romantic writing.
Nice read...touching and melancholic in a way! I like the idea of the black roses.
Very touching romantic read...........In the valley of mind, you wrote words of romantic kind........A Good Write.....................
a nice expression of love..tho it is only happening in ur imagination but at least it helps to ease ur loneliness..the fact is; ; not everything we want, we get.......naizz
wow hold on... you came on so touching and strong great lines very very appealing and identifiable superb write cheers
Amazing lines and thoroughly enjoyed reading.......... thank you for your kind sharing.
very ethereal keep on plugin!