Tuesday, February 14, 2012

In The Valley Of Light Comments

Rating: 4.0

Beneath the old bridge where the old highway ends
I sat with my feet in the freezing cold river
Where time wears away dear but never mends
It hasn't been long but it seems like forever
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jim hogg
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Anthony Burge 07 April 2013

Special love in a special place. Nice work Jim.

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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 22 February 2012

Beautifully written....though lovers be lost but love shall not...keep it up....i luv it. Please read my poem Do not despair at the death of the light leave a comment/criticism too thanks for sharing, i like ur style of writting...+

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Jake Deeds 22 February 2012

I absolutely love the way you intwine real names and places you have enjoyed into your works...I think I shall try the same...[][

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