Friday, April 14, 2006

In The Twilight Of Barcelona Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the twilight of Barcelona
I gaze into your eyes, my beloved,
I smell the sweetness of your hair,
I cradle your face in the palm of my right hand,
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William Jackson
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Melvina Germain 04 September 2006

A bit of romance, nicely protrayed---Melvina

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Will Barber 14 May 2006

Decided to read this because I'd been out in the twilight in Barcelona myself. Sound like you had a much more romantic time than I did! I was lurching through an army of 'ladies of the night' on La Rambla, trying to find a taxi to take me to see Gaudi's cathedral. Took quite a while, but I made it! By the way, this was an excellent and evocative poem. Silly of me to say more.

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***** ********* 28 April 2006

I'm off spain personally, but Rome is still on my list of the most romantic cities in the world and this poem would serve any of them perfectly William,10 from another romantic, Tai

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Patricia Gale 15 April 2006

A wonderful way to view life. Caressing the one you love, a gentle laugh......very loving. Patricia Gale

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William Jackson

William Jackson

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