Wednesday, June 29, 2016

In the Theatre Comments

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Sister saying—‘Soon you'll be back in the ward,'
sister thinking—‘Only two more on the list,'
the patient saying—‘Thank you, I feel fine';
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Dannie Abse
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Myrtle Thomas 15 June 2023

A wonderful read with depth and imagery.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 October 2019

2) May Dr. Daniel rest in peace. Thank you so much Poem Hunter and Team to have chosen Dannie Abse´s poem as The Modern Poem Of The Day. Men, even doctors are human and have deep emotions either. Dannie Abse showed in this poem how very painful such a moment is, especially when a dedicated medical doctor failed to help. I will read this beautiful saddest poem time and again. A very touching poem, superbly written.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 October 2019

Dannie Abse as poet better known as a dedicated medical doctor created this superb poem about a patient who is going to die. I have in my life known so many doctors and we can read here how very sad and tragic this is, the moment that a dedicated doctor failed to help, the tragedy I can feel, the deep sadness the doctot felt at that moment. CONGRATULATIONS to the family Abse in the UK for this prize of honour.

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Chinedu Dike 28 October 2019

A beautiful work of art. Well conceived and elegantly brought forth with insight. Thanks for sharing.

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Tamara Beryl Latham 28 October 2019

Haunting imagery that is amplified by the gramophone, " Leave...my...soul...alone." An excellent write on hospitals, and their nurses and doctors where saving a live is trumpeted. Thanks for posting this Dannie Abse poem. : -)

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Anil Kumar Panda 28 October 2018

Very interesting poem indeed.Enjoyed the concept and flow.10++++

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Savita Tyagi 28 October 2018

Very dramatic poem where so many questions arise. Drama ceases but impressions last long. Wonderful read.

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Adrian Flett 28 October 2018

The telling rhymes in the first three stanzas are abandoned in the last, as the huge battle to save a life fails. The attempt to save the soul then, 'to cease at last when something other died.' The thoughtful quest to know what constitutes life its self, by the poet who was also a dedicated medical doctor..

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Ratnakar Mandlik 28 October 2018

A beautifully conceived thought provoking poem.

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 October 2018

its beautiful poem - home alone, sound around, scream bounds to be crowned! /// all interesting

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Vicky Hampton 10 October 2018

POEMHUNTER - It's insulting to the author, and bad editorial practice, to reproduce a poem without the notes the author published with it. And this poem has an important explanatory title note. I'm sure, if Dannie Abse was alive, he'd be deeply upset to find has been omitted here.

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Vicky Hampton 10 October 2018

SHOCKING POEMHUNTER! This poem is without its title note and quote! It's important: the quote comes from his father, a doctor & surgeon (as was DA) and allows the reader to understand the full horror and historical setting, as well as the poems', and author's, humanity. Please include it PoemHunter!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 October 2017

A rare subject to touch. Clinical accounts are vividly presented. Excellent write.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 October 2017

Such an interesting poem by Dannie Abse.....

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Rae Seagull 28 October 2017

Superbly penned. Surgery gone wrong and his time runs out... Congratulations on Poem of the Day, Dannie. Truly well deserved.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 28 October 2017

A chill runs through the spine as you read the poem of sickness, hospitals, doctors and nurses. How the body leaves the soul is a painful experience, so well portrayed through this poignant poem. Congratulations Dannie.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 October 2017

A great write, thanks for sharing it. 10+++ for it.

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Jeanette Telusma 28 October 2017

Outstanding write and very well expressed.

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Alina Kaikeyi 28 October 2017

Beautifully penned. Thanks for sharing. Leave my soul alone, leave my soul alone, ' that voice so arctic and that cry so odd had nowhere else to go—till the antique gramophone wound down and the words began 10 for it.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 October 2017

Matched the silence under snow! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dannie Abse

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