Monday, October 5, 2009

In The Slow Motion Traffic Jam Of Sky Comments

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Today, the same old things- the new scars,
Ringless fingers,
And the way the clouds tended to move like
Somnulent cars
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Robert Rorabeck
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Hans Vr 22 July 2011

Good poem. Images well chosen

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Kerry O'Connor 06 October 2009

Better and better - I like the verbal link between the somnolent cars and the traffic jam of sky. Excellent.

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Robert Rorabeck

Robert Rorabeck

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