In The Silent Shade Comments

Brilliant thoughts in its simplicity. Great brevity.10

Powerful, a Very passionate write indeed, thank you for sharing Dr

it is a true sayings that you said. Someone must love someone for nothing materialistic but for being the real man, the uniqueness. IT TOUCHED MY HEART.

Such a powerful message simply stated.

..........of wishes unfulfilled. Perfect poem.

you keep on amazed me... so nice, so touching, so wonderful, your really such a great poet.

A beautiful expression of true everlasting love my friend. Tim

Your heart shall beat in rhythms unheard very good poem

beautiful piece my friend love it short and powerful

I like this short poem very much. The last line took me by surprise- a very quiet surprise. Well done!

A surreal poem of endless love. Quite interesting and thought provoking. I enjoyed it very much!

In few lines, I found the romantic love. Thank you for sharing this great poem.

I agree Philo - my beautiful husband flew away two years ago, and though at times I cry, I am so happy that he is at peace and not suffering. I know I will see him again and that this earth is not really our home, its just somewhere to visit. I am still completely in love with my husband and will shortly pen my poetry about him.

God is the one who can do wonders.....................

The passion of love reaching into ones heart and trying to defeat the Angel of Death. This tale is felt by us in a Life time. RAB

wishes unfulfilled. yes It is true, that is the life of a person. But God is there to full fill all our needs. keep on striving.

A nice Poem......Powerful

Fine Poem................

Powerful and precise. Need I say more.

Fantastic image you have etched into my mind! I have done the same thing many times in life, it touches the sadness of the soul. Great Haiku! Thank you for sharing. Added to my favorite poem list. A 10 for it! RoseAnn