In The Silence Of The Night Comments

i am able to visualize the rising of that brew intoxicated river side village night singing under the dim crescent light...a beautiful poem picture here *10*

So today you took us to a haunt…to the surroundings of Santal village only to be touched by the sweet Mahua breeze…the melody of the flute, the sunset …exotic nature imagery and definitely spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings…recollected…on 25th … Smooth rhyming melting as we read….

You paint a beautiful scene with lots of vivid images. I like the word 'hutments'.

it is a beautiful poem.the images you have evoked are so vivid.

it is a beautiful poem.the images you have evoked are so vivid.