Thursday, December 27, 2007

In The Shadows Of War Comments

Rating: 3.5

In the shadows...
To the broken dreams of freedom..
To the mountains of the only salvation..
They pray not to lose their relatives..
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Terpsichory wildchild(girl)
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Linda Weischedel 28 December 2007

A 10 for sure! This is my favorite part of your poem: They try to forget the pain.. In the grave a flower blooms... Reminding them that the life grows! Awesome poem! Always, Linda

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